trapped part two!!!

you wake and look around you were no longer in your house it felt like you weren't even in the same galaxy anymore.the room that you were in was an old Victorian style room there was a vanity mirror in the corner and beside that there was a large wardrobe closet. you walk over to the wardrobe closet and open it up, it's filled with long dresser. One half is blood red and the other half is either black or purple. you sigh and sit on the ground dramatically. A large skirt billows around you, it was just then that you noticed that some one had changed you. You were no longer wearing your p.J's but now you were in a long purple and black dress with net sleeves.1

"what?" you mumble to your self.2

Things start to come back to you the figure, the bat and your little brother.3

"where is some paper" you yell at yourself not caring who heard you.4

Just then a desk appeared on the wall opposite to you. It to was Victorian style and it had a pad of paper and a pen sitting on the top. You sit down and Begin to write:5

I don't know where i am or who has me here i have to find away out and get back home........6

Suddenly the door opens and a girl dressed in a maid outfit says7

"the master would like to see you now" she looked down at the ground shut the door and walked away. 8

"WAIT" you cry out running for the door but she was already gone.9

"well i hope it was her who dressed me and not the master who ever the heck that is" you sigh to yourself.10

you began your jernouny around the mansion to find the "master" that the girl was talking about. You pass several rooms before you find the dinning room where the "master" was, what looked like a servants quarter and the kitchen. you didn't see the girl again but once you got to the dinning room you saw a long table with two chairs at ether end and the chair at the end farthest away from the door was turned away from you towards a large fire.11

"______ so glad you could join me, i hope you had a nice rest" you heard a young mans voice say.12

"ummmm yes it was.....nice" you stutter.13

The chair turns around and in it is a young man with sandy Blondie hair and dark green eyes he was wearing a suit and he was staring directly at you.14

"i see that you got changed" he nodded towards your dress.15

"ummm yes it's very nice thank you" you say just to be polite you weren't really fond of dresses but at least they weren't pink.16

"no need to thank me, thank Olivia the maid she got them for you" he said smiling.17

"o OK well you knew my name already but are you going to tell me yours?" you ask questioningly.18

"ah yes how rude of me my name is Paul" he nods to the chair across from him" have a seat dinner will be served soon"19

you sit down and study his face he seemed innocent enough but if he was nice why did he take you?20

Olivia came into the dinning room caring to platters  she set one in front of you and gave the other to Paul. she pulled off the cover and inside yours was a steak already cut into small pieces, Paul's was similar to yours. you smelt the meat before taking a bite, the flavour was richer then anything that you had eaten at home.21

Olivia walked out of the room after a small bow, just then you notice Paul studying you carefully.22

"your a very pretty girl but you know that don't  you?"he smiles at you23

"ummmmmm" you stutter blushing.24

All of a sudden you see to large black wings come out of Paul's back, you fall backwards out of your chair startled.25

"don't be afraid"Paul says in a calm voice.26

"what are you?" you manage to say27

"i my dear am a....28

Author notes

well i hope you like this one i got some nice messages so i decided to keep going well heres the next one any comments are appriciated

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  • Brokenangels
    May 16, 2005
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    i'm annie bannie lol i had a lot of sugar and my head hurts lol well ttyl

  • Angel Of Elements
    April 16, 2005
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    I think the story was great, cough cough "Not" cough j/k lol I was good. I usually don't read these kind's of storys because i read harry potter....lol well ttyl annie

  • Brokenangels
    April 15, 2005
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    laughs it is my master plan and kir kir won't hit me she knows i'll hit her back if she does >.< well thanks for the comment


  • Necromancer Kitten
    April 15, 2005
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    Thats not fair!!! Its a cliff hanger!!! I want the next Part NOW!!!! You'd better or, or, I'll get kir kir to hit you. jeez... but yah... it was really well written!!!