it wasn't particularly hard to break into the mall. As a matter of fact it was easier than getting into my top drawer at home. All we had to do was throw a rock at the window then climb on in. Jared had the alarm codes. After he disengaged them, we would have ten minutes to find what we were looking for and get out. I wasn't so sure if we would all make it out but that was the lure of the job. Never knowing if this hit will be your last. The constant gut feeling that if you screw this up it was all over, for every one.1
"Ally! Get over here and stop daydreaming or so help me I'll feed you to the dust worm myself!" 2
I looked up. Demeter and the others were far ahead. I quickened my pace but tried to be nonchalant about it. She may be the HB of the boys but not mine. I came up slowly and shrugged. She was always passing me death threats but I'm too valuable to really kill. Besides I give her a run for attention and competition.
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getting started again i know too many stuf at once but i don't want it to get deleted. Yea it'as not even close to resembling a story but hey I've have to work and go to school most of the time. I'll work this week end though. Cross my heart.
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Well, it's a good start. Although there are quite the few mistakes: spelling errors, grammar and capitalization. I suggest that you work on those.
I know that it is still not finished, but I still love it. Keep up the good work -
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Where to begin, well LOT'S of misspelling, zero capitalization.........What was the concept of this story, it was practically meaningless. SORRY!=)=) -
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it's not finished. But i've had it on my drafts for awhile and i lost the carbon copies. Please bare with me...and maybe read something else< hint hint, nudge "others by InkPixs" wink wink!
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