Unhappy times

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My sister Sara Dawn, 2

as beautiful as she is, she cries. 3

With deep sorrow that hardly shows, 4

she's dying inside. 5

And I wish that I could be there, 6

on her graduation day. 7

To let her keep on living, 8

oh Dear Lord I pray. 9

She misses her two angels, 10

two of her best friends. 11

They should be there with her, 12

to celebrate the end. 13

A chapter of her life will close, 14

and she'll feel so alone. 15

Help her Lord to get through it, 16

she's never on her own. 17

And on that special day, 18

her angels she will feel. 19

Because they'll be right beside her, 20

so the pain isn't real. 21

They're always watching over her, 22

wishing she could laugh. 23

Blessing her with angel kisses, 24

helping her relive through the past. 25

R.I.P. Vicki and Megan 26

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I love you Sara Dawn, and you are more then my sister, you're my hope, and my heart. I hope that things turn out okay, and I'm so sorry that I can't be there, but soon sis. You have to hang on, keep living for Vicki and Megan, your beautiful Angels.
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I know this poem isn't the best, I'm all jumbled right now. I'm sorry sis, I love you, and I'm here for you. I know how it is to relaps, I've cut twice this month, but we're fighting, you aren't alone because Jessica and I are right here with you, and Megan and Vicki are shining down on you hun

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  • LaAmyaArlene
    May 6, 2005
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    Before the 5minutes last night, I didn't talk to Jessica for a while, and really haven't for the last week and a half. I have a knew boyfriend, I don't get much sleep, and I've been working, and school, and just, yeah... I'm always so tired, and out of it. I didn't sleep for 36hours, and on the day of Jessie's death I fell asleep at 7pm and slept all night til 6:30am, so yeah. I love you more then anything, you're always my sister, my first sister, and the one that I look up to and adore. You understand me more then anyone, because step by step, through cutting, Eds, and whatever, you've been there Thank you for being my beautiful sister. I love you so much sis. I tried to call you yestarday around 6pm, but I guess you were sleeping.

    LaLa

  • Sara Bellem
    May 5, 2005
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    This is beautiful sis, I absolutely love and adore it, you sure know how to take your sister's heart ... I love you Hun and I hope all is well with you, I know ysterday was hard for you, but I guess you had Jessica to help you through it ---Sara

  • pillprincess
    April 18, 2005
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    aww this is so good i know that sara wiil love it trust me

  • LaAmyaArlene
    April 16, 2005
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    Me, gorgeous? Haha... Yeah Right! But Thank you sweet heart!

    LaLa

  • Miss Faerie
    April 16, 2005
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    Oh honey this is a beautiful write and I noe she'll love it. It's so touching and it's beautiful she has people who care. I'm hoping to write for it too.
    You are so gorgeous LaLa
    love shari

  • LaAmyaArlene
    April 15, 2005
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    It helps to write. I love Sara, so I'm more then willing to write for her Thank you huni


  • dark-fairy-goddess
    April 15, 2005
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    I don't know why you say this isn't very good, because it is wonderful!! It comes from your heart and you speak your feelings on this one. I have been holding in my feelings for a long time now and am feeling like I am ready to blow up.... I will probably be writing some once I get over this writers block. Love you sweetie and am always thinking of you and Sara. ~Angel Eyes


  • poetry within
    April 15, 2005
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    another heartfelt emotional peice. this is beautiful lala. I see you and sarah( i love that name!) have alot in common and she is so blessed to have you as her friend,as am i. you are such a sweetheart. i hope sarah comes through this tough time with your help. bless you both


  • I dont know
    April 15, 2005
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    this is so beautiful and it comes more from your heart than ive ever seen b4 be strong and u will survive luv me xoxo


  • leander
    April 15, 2005
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    It doesn't really matter what you think about this poem being not that good hunny cause it is! and besides, you wrote this for Sara, trying to comfort her in difficult times.

    Keep it up sweety, love you!

    Mammy


  • April 14, 2005
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    This is awesome.

  • UnderTheFloorboards
    April 14, 2005
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    this is very sweet... i like how you express your feelings to them so openly and word them so much.. not even a stutter..
    great job
    ~Joy

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