No Longer

I will no longer cry
For your love.
I will no longer beg
For you to notice me.
I will no longer hope
For you to feel the same.
I will no longer plea
For the ability to stay by your side.1

Instead of chasing you,
I'll chase my own dreams,
Hoping that they won't leave me running in circles.

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  • asthray.heart
    December 16, 2008
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    Strong ending. Shows the lost and confused side of these feelings and the poem.


  • apocalyptica
    November 6, 2008

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    very nice!

    I quite liked it...my only problem with it was that it was too short.