Why

Why does it seem1

Like I'm the only one trying?2

I show you concern, 3

I care about your life, 4

But you don't seem to care. 5

Are we on the same page6

Or are you looking at something different?7

In this week, 8

You've manage to ignore me. 9

Not once, but twice. 10

Should I just stop trying, 11

Should I let it go and just ignore too?12

Tell me what you want, 13

Don't leave me hanging, 14

It only causes worry and anger. 15

Tell me what's what so I know. 16

Am I being petty about this, 17

Or do I have a real right to be upset?18

Is this just your personality, 19

Or is it me?20

Please, don't leave me hanging, 21

Because when things get left hung for too long,22

They die.

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  • pathetic
    December 16, 2008
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    The ending is so sad. Sometimes you need to have faith in leaving things.


  • KiwiGurl
    November 15, 2008

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    I like the dark "edge" to this story. You can really relate to the thoughts and ideas of the narrator. Great job!