trapped part one

you wake up seven minutes before your alarm goes off "typical" you hiss to your self. you never really enjoyed going to school and waking up early just added to the misery of it. you weren't really a popular girl at school more of an out cast with a few close friends(kirstie,Eden,Aimee and Amy) you had a few more friends then that but didn't really talk to them. as you stepped out of bed and your feet touched the freezing wood floor, you hear a crash in the kitchen*sigh* it was only 6:23 and your brother had already caused a crisis. you slip on your long black bathrobe over your Emily's strange p.J's and tie up you shoulder length Blondie hair before going down stairs. while walking through the halls you see that your brothers door is closed and you can hear him snoring still asleep. you began to worry, if that wasn't your brother then who or what was it? you tip tow quietly down the hall and look at your parents room nope their door was also shut. hopeing as you carefully climb down the stairs you arrive at your first stop the laundry room you look inside and see your rabbit curled up in his basket. your breath is coming in faster and shorter breaths each time.you hiss quietly towards the kitchen "get out of my house i have a bat and i will hurt you" all of a sudden you can hear your alarm blaring from upstairs you jump and run to turn it off. once you get back down stairs you can still hear the weird noise. when all of a sudden you hear a creak on the stairs behind you turn around waving your arms to find your little brother staring at you dumbfounded. 1

"_______ what are you doing?" he mumbles in his sleep"it looks like your practicing for baseball" 2

"ummmmm"you mumble trying to think of a reason that won't scare him"i guess i am now what are u doing down stairs you don't have to be up for another 2 hours" 3

"i was thirsty" Alex(your little brothers name)replied. 4

"well go get a drink from the bathroom upstairs" you hiss 5

"whatever" Alex whines as he climbs back upstairs 6

you turn around to try and figure out what was making that noise and just as you do you see a figure emerge from the kitchen. 7

"_____"it moans 8

"h-h-h-how do you know my name"you manage to stutter. 9

the figure doesn't reply but only moves closer to you. you swing the bat in your hands only to find out that there was no bat in the first place. just as the figure reaches for you every thing goes black......... 10

Author notes

this is my first story here so ya....hope you like it

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