Names!

40-year-old ER doctor - Dean Bernard Parker1

14-year-old 'emo' girl - Saturn Jewel Parker2

12-year-old boy - Benjamin James Parker3

19-year-old 'brownnoser' girl - Amanda Diane Wilson

Author notes

Well, to make a long note short. My name is Mariah (Account name is Neon) and I am a beginner at this. It is surprisingly the first thing I wrote and submitted on this website, ha-ha, so feel special .

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  • XxpooranatevkaxX
    April 18
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    this is good. i like it. keep on expanding your writing and technique. I'm sure you'll be great.


  • VioletConcept
    November 4, 2008

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    Dean is okay, im not sure it suits him very well; Im not IN LOVE with Saturn... but that might be because I hate the planet (dont ask); Benjamin is pretty good, it might do; Amanda is a really good name for her...

    Thank you for entering and goodluck!

    VH