The Warrior

I feel my sword sink
I hear the flesh rip
The Iron Clad warriors
The screams of pain1

Adrenaline rushes through my blood
A pain-driven solider cuts my leg
I feel it not2

But then I fall
Into the mud
A spear driven
Through by back

Author notes

Just a little thing I wrote when I was bored. I was reading Brisingr at the time so I might have gotten Ideas from that book.

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Comments


  • MsAlee gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    Very well written. To be so short there is just enough detail.


  • TNTrouble
    November 4, 2008
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    Very good.