Marty Mango and his kitchen pals Chapter 1.


I was sitting on the counter the other day, as I always do, when Banana came over to me and said, "Mango!There you are!Come have a look at this, turkey isn't doing so well....I think he's going...you know..bad."
I rolled my eyes, why do I always have to look at the sick foods, why not, Ketchup, she has a sweet, sometimes sour personality! Why not Pear? He is VERY soft and sweet all the time!
I got up and rolled over to the edge of the counter and into the refrigerator. Then I took a look at turkey, yes, unfortunately he was going bad...he had to go down the...the.... the disposal!1

We were all quiet after that..just standing next to the sink until Apple said, 2

"I hope you're happy Mango! He was a good friend!"
Do they think I am happy when I have to do that? NO! My own Mother had to face the disposal ; not but a month ago...but it fruit years that is..lets see...4 1/2 years.3

We all got back in our places and had a little rest before we had our farewell ceremony for Orange and PB&J, they were you know....lunch. We knew this because we have Mayonnaise, he is psychic so we always know who is going to perish before they do.4

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Then we all slept until I had to go check on Baby Apple, she had been dropped and was a little bruised so we had to do some simple surgery.

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But finally we had another ceremony for the Frozen pizza and the Coke.. before we all hunkered down for bed...the end.8

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Tune in next time for more adventures with Marty Mango!

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Author notes

Sorry if it was to cheesy, I know you said not to make it to stupid but hey, I just thought I would have some fun this time around.

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  • KiwiGurl
    November 16, 2008

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    fruits that talk when people aren't around. very origional! Great job! I loved how you put emotion into this! Keep writing and good luck in the contest!


  • BuffyTheVampSlayer
    November 16, 2008

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    like you said silly story about cheese silly story about fruit maybe you should read your own work before you read someone elses


  • Ghost of a Siren
    November 5, 2008
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    lol, I actually found this very amusing. Great job, t'was funny.


  • Bells Kelly
    November 4, 2008

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    good attempt, maybe a little more detail next time but an interisting read and a good idea.
    cheers
    Hunter~


  • bakermiddle
    November 4, 2008

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    I personally didn't like this too much. It's only for personal reasons. There are many, many, many errors in grammar. I know that you might not think about that as you write but it was very distracting, at least for me it was.


    • SunshineDancer423
      November 4, 2008
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      Thanks.

      Thank you for your comment. I know that there were grammar mistake, I tried to fix them but you read it before I submitted the edited version.Thanks for reading it though, I didn't expect it to be raved about, I know it is stupid.

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