Unfinished

The seconds passed, turning into minutes which ticked away into hours. Drifting by with no visible end, leaving her stuck in a state of complete and utter terror. Fearing that with every passing second more andmore blood was pouring from within his body. That the pain was becoming too much for him to bear and that he was nearing anchoice that would change his life, or lack thereof, and her life..forever.1

He had never really been strong enough to be with her. He was so kind, and sweet, and so full of love, and she was cold, unfeeling and distant. And even though they were so different, they had one important thing in common. They were truly, madly, deeply, completely, and hopelessly in love.

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  • FoxMcShane
    December 13, 2008
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    Very nice.


  • SprinkledCupcake
    November 28, 2008
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    This is amazing. It's really good. I hope this is just an intro. I wanna read more. ^^


  • Other Side
    November 4, 2008

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    This is why I joined.I need meaningful, powerful, lovley, dark, words to help me escape, and the writing on this site gives it to me. Encluding yours.


    • SaviDropKick.Oi.
      November 9, 2008
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      Wow...thanks so much! It isnt finished but im trying..Ill let you know when im done if ya like..

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