An Archeological Upgrade

Your father is an archeologist and he takes you to a ancinet site. Before he goes his way, he tells you not to wander off. You, being stubborn, ignore your father warning and wander off into the ancient site. You enter a shrine and see a blue color staff *discription of the staff* lying on the floor. Curious as always, you touch it and before you know it, everythings started changing and your surroundings dissolve into nothingness...

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Well here is your needed prompt.
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  • lavanya
    November 10, 2008
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    HE..HE..HE...HE !!!!

    its something very light and no doubt hilerious shorty


  • yumesandman
    November 3, 2008
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    Neat! That could be fun, especially considering where and when you might get transported to. Ooo, maybe you can go back in time and have to rely on all the lectures your father gave you (but you, of course, never listened to!) to try and survive.

    Very fun prompt, thank you!


  • Be.Your.Own.Hero
    November 1, 2008

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    Whoah! That's an awesome prompt! I wish I was the one who got it XD Great job and good luck!

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.