I sit and look at him..1
As he slides his finger up his nose2
I think to myself3
GROSS!!!4
EWW!!5
Why can`t have any normal people in my school6
He sits moving his finger up further7
What does he think is up there gold8
Then after all this9
The worst part EVER10
He has the balls to take it and...11
EWWWWWWWW12
Put it in his mouth13
Then with a flick of the finger14
It lands on another head15
Of all the things to do in this world16
Why does he pick17
To pick his nose18
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in line 17 I think it should be have instead of pick, but besides that it is good.
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hahah this one really cracked me up. good word usage and you definetly manage to convey your disgust to the reader
original content i must say!!! well done ...keep it up!
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Thank you for commenting on my poem "cute little blue eyes". This is my newest poem and I really appreciate the criticism! thanks! Nice job with this poem. It was really cute. I think that picking your nose is really gross, but I think that must people do it and they don't own up to doing it! lol.. very nice. it was actually a little bit funny if that makes sense! lol.. but thanks for the input for my poem!
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Not only gross, but comical as well. I think this bothers the majority of us, but you were the one who was bold enough to put it into words. Kudos to you!~vj
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This poem is so gross! LOL Honestly, you did such a good job of sharing details that it is just gross to read. Very good job. God Bless and Good Luck! Penny
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I thought I'd gag before getting to the end of this. That is more than a peeve of mine...that is total disgusting..lol
You paint a clear picture...too clear.. I had to rush through it in order not to get sick..lol Well done.
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grosssssssss :p
There's this guy that I've gone to school with since like... elementary school, and he's kinda "special" but uhh... It's gross... He smells like urine and he picks his nose during class and eats it...and it's disgusting. Yeah... And don't you hate it when people pick their noses when they're alone in their cars? They think that they're soooo invisible to the rest of the world but then you look next to your car at a red light and there they are with their finger smashed all the way up there. It's freaking disgusting... Wow, hooray for ranting about nosepickers and grossness that is included... Well anyway, nice poem, in a gross, disgusting, nauseating way, haha. Keep up the good work!
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