A little girl stands on a hill behind her trailer home. Her long brunette hair blows over her face as she stares blankly at the cloudy sky. She hears her mom screaming her name, so she runs down the hill letting giggles flow out her lips. Half way to the back door, the little child sees blue car covers in a pile. As her eyes bubble up with curiosity, she lifts part of a cover to see what's hidden underneath. To what was wonder on the girl's face was now terror. A Metal animal cage stood to Kristy's waist. In it was a brunette young girl, naked and bleeding to death.1
A once little girl aged by years gasps for air as she swings her body forward. Kristy calms down alittle and begins analyzing her dream. She walks to her computer and types in Timothy **********. Thirty Four more years, and she'll yet again live in fear. A whimpering sentence forces its way out saying "Why didn't you just kill me." Knowing the little girl was looking at herself in the cage.
Author notes
True story.. Hi I'm Kristy.
Comments
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This is really good
a little disturbing but overall a well written piece.
Ink
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This story really confused me. What did you mean by those two paragraphs.
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it's plain what it means. I don't know what else to say to ya kid.
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KristBrainsikk
I'm not a kid I'm 18. But are you trying to say that you had a dream and then realized it was you? -
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You're younger than me AKA a kid. I know I was the little girl, but realized that I also was the girl in the cage. I simplified because really in the dream there were about 6 cages.. this I just put one.
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KristyBrainSikk
No dear i'm not younger then you. I'm 18 and soon in a month be 19, but don't be saying stuff you don't know the facts on. So go ahead and be a dumb ass and see where it gets you. -
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Todays the 2nd? It's my sister 22nd bday today. My birthday's 2 weeks after hers. AKA I'm older than you. that's how I knew you were younger
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Um no dear your not older then me. I turn 19 next month older then me would be a whole year. So look who's talking
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Days, weeks, months.. I'm still older than you child, get over it.
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KristyBrainsikk
No dear it's years whic is how old you are. You get over it, child your the one arguing with me on how old I am and IF I'm a kid. So "kid" get over it. -
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No, it's not. I'm days OLDER than you. So, I'm older than you CHILD.
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No it's YEARS OLDER then me. If I was a child I would be under 18. So look who is talking smart one.
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you're pathetic, admit it child, I'm older than you.
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Your pathetic look who's talking you have a boy hair cut pasty make up with black lipstick. I'm 18 soon to be 19 and I KNOW how to put make up correctly. Look who is talking I'm older then you apparently with self image and make up ways. Look child your fighting with me. I could back off but I'm not. Your the child fighting with me.
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That's me at 13, child. You sunk LOW talking about shit like that. Wow, you must not have any life.
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And I'm right and your wrong. So please go ahead and make yourself look more like a fool right now.
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You don't have a life for arguging with me. I'm not talking shit about you I'm just stating the honest truth. So if you wanna stop bitching at me child then go ahead.
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WOW! You are horrible at this! I give you a -1! You suck BAD!!
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Look who's talkin emo dyke. If you wanna say stuff go ahead I don't care. your blocked so go back to cutting your wrists dumb fat ass.
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ladys and gentlemen, I give you a poor example of a human being. You see, it didn't take me alot to get this person to snap. I used 'eatiteatit' as a test to see if I was good at mind tricking people. You see this person went from believing something into not believing it- but didn't want to admit it. So, they took the easy way out- verbally attacking me. Making me right and them wrong. Thank you 'eatiteatit'.
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This is the last comment I'll ever give you, because your a waste of my time and alot of other peoples time no wonder why that guy didn't kill you because you were so fucking annoying, but yeah I'm done wasting my time on a thing like you. So thanks for trying to put up a good fight.
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No dear I didn't snap. I'm just sick of emo people who think they can act all bad ass on here, when in fact you'd be begging me not to kick your ass if we met in real life. And if you mind tricked me I'm pretty sure I would've done alot of other stuff to be "pissed" off. So get your facts straight, and quit making your self a disgrace with who you are.
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p.s. not emo- I'm a 'raver'
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Aw, you care enough to msg back- when you said that you weren't- twice to
I hit a nerve- don't deny it child, I did
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So that happened to you? That's really sad.
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Very sad and tragic. It really brings forth ones emotion, well done and well written!!
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