Camara and the Golden Locket

Camara Lace tucked the tear stained note in her sweatshirt pocket. The note read,1

YOU UGLY *bunny*!!!!! GET OUT OF THIS TOWN!! YOU DON'T BELONG HERE YOU *bunny*!!!!2

Camara let another tear spill down her cheek as she pulled on her backpack and started to walk down the street. Camara had just moved from Oregon all the way to New York. At first, she thought that New York would be a great place to live. But as it turned out, the girls at Harson Middle School were not all that friendly. Camara had had soda poured over her head, water soaking her clothes and a page from her diary torn out of her diary and read to her crush. But none of the girls understood. Camara's mom had died when she was four, and she had been taking care of her younger sister, Giana, ever since. 3

(I'm going to post a second part but I have to go to bed right now.)

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  • Mistystar
    January 1

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    Wow I feel so bad for this girl! I cant wait for you to continue this story! I give you s up!!


  • angelaononchan
    November 7, 2008

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    Wow, sad, it's bad to be called that, although I don't know since the word is like this: *bunny* and please continue, good luck in the contest.


  • Artificial.Smiles. gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    =[

    i feel so bad for this girl!
    i didnt even realize it, but i started to tear up.]

    you must write more!!!(:

    Good Luck in my Contest!!=]