The pain in my fire.

You’re not the only one here, your not the only one that hurts, I can feel this pain too. You tell me to get over what you hated to get over yourself. 1

This pain is killing me, this anger is dancing through my body and making me run faster then I have before, harder then I should.2

This pain, your gain, I’m trying to understand, but its harder then it should be, you tell me to get over it, that I’ll thank you later, but I swear to you now I embrace pain, to surround my heart in a castle with no doors.3

This is my siege on your gate, your moat is empty and your guards are easily slain. Laughing as I break your walls, shattering the glass windows of your smart little stores, stomping on the idle little doll heads, they can’t have what I never had.4

Pull down the welcome signs and destroy what you have built.5

This pain was killing me and much like you I was dying, but now I feel greater then before. This pain has made me stronger and unlike you I can be anyone I want, I can do anything that puts hate and destruction on my platter of vengeance. 6

Your death will satisfy me, but if I can’t get to you your followers, the children that have followed you everywhere you went, you sheep in a pig pen… they’ll be the first to go. Their eager smiles will be ripped from their faces and their tears be sheathed by my sword of misery.7

Turn off the lights and forget about me, but when they go on you’ll see what I am talking about, my face will be your nightmares and I will be better then you could ever imagine.8

So shut up and bring it on. Your pain gives me power, your faltering heals my wounds, run your blade of hypocrisy through my heart and I will be laughing, leaving you behind to wonder why. 9

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  • TNTrouble
    November 12, 2008

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    Pain...death...bah. Good write once again mate. You are so good at putting yourself out there and revealing emotions throught your writing.


    • Asonine
      November 12, 2008
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      Thanks, I like this one, its abstract the way I like it, but also is emotional... idk, thanks though lol


  • killwhatyouadore
    October 31, 2008

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    This is absolutely inspirational. Seriously beautiful. I would like to put it on my profile on myspace, giving credit to you of course to advertise storywrite. If no, that's perfectly fine too. Let me know how you feel about it.

    • Asonine
      November 2, 2008
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      Yeah of course!!! just make sure people know where its from and who its by, cause I wouldn't want to NOT give any credit to StoryWrite and I reckon neither would you.lol. But yeah that is very much fine with me, I'm glad you liked it that much!

      LH


      • killwhatyouadore
        November 3, 2008
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        oh no I will ber certain that people know who wrote it =) no worries

        • Asonine
          November 3, 2008
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          good lol, I have had a few people post my poems on their MS' and say they wrote it.. I almost tracked them down and killed them... but that would be to harsh lol yeah, also, just make sure they know its from SW, so they can get credit too.

          • killwhatyouadore
            November 4, 2008
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            hahaha that would have been EPIC!!! that would be the best newspaper headline for murder i have ever seen. if you decide to tape it be sure to put it on youtube . haha jk my mind is warped but not THAT warped.

            • Asonine
              November 6, 2008
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              yeah it would have been great... don't worry.. I am probably more warped then you.... maybe I should kill lke that just to make headlnes lol


              • killwhatyouadore
                November 6, 2008
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                ooh that is pretty warped...but it would be a better headline than what is in the paper at the moment =(


                • Asonine
                  November 6, 2008
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                  bout Obama?


                  • killwhatyouadore
                    November 6, 2008
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                    yeah im not really happy about it....but then again i dont really like either one of the candidates


                    • Asonine
                      November 8, 2008
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                      I liked Ron Paul, but he didn;t even make it in lol

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