I look over my shoulder. Nothing there. I look over my other shoulder. There's nothing there either. I try to shake off my paranoia and go back to slurping my milkshake while half heartedly listen to Jed and Cassie's random fight.1
"Ham and pineapple is the best pizza..."2
"OBVIOUSLY pepperoni is!!" 3
I chuckle, they've argued about this so many times you would've thought that they would have given up, but no, they were both as stubborn as each other. 4
I feel a tap on my shoulder, and I snap, "Look, whoever you are will you stop staring at me and leave me alone please!!" I blush as the waitress slams down the pizza in front of me, obviously annoyed at the aggressive greeting. "Sorry!" I try to mutter but she had already stormed off. "Oh well..." I think to myself. Even though I was extremely embarrassed, I couldn't shake that feeling of being watched. 5
I looked over my shoulder one more time and caught a glimpse of a man turning away. As no one else in the Pizza place was looking in my direction, I assumed this man was the one looking. I decided to follow him, something drew me too him and I felt that I needed to follow him. He walked out of the pizza place, and down the road. He knew I was following him, I could sense that he wanted me to follow him, but he never looked behind him. I followed him further up the road, passing shops and people I knew. 6
Eventually the surroundings where all blurred and I just focused on following him. I couldn't risk losing him. There was such a strong pull between us. He walked into a dead end alley and stopped. I stopped as well, keeping a distance between us. Slowly, he turned around...7
I gasped... I couldn't push the words out of my mouth. "Da... Dad??" 8
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woo hoo!! stoopid writers block!!
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Le gasp! Her father? =O
How dramatic!
And what intrigue! X)
This is getting thicker by the minute! We must move onto the next chapter to see what happens! -
oooo daddy? how does she know?
how can she remember? argh, so many confused thoughts!!!!
anyway, lets read the next one..
l8az sky x -
wow! you sure build the tempo right- this is brilliant
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you know what im gunna say dont you! also YAY, i suggested you make it her dad, even though you were probs goin to neway. well done this once again captured me so quickly and wouldn't let me leave. keep it up. sorry i have to say it............. WRITE MORE!
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yes, it's been forever. lol. Write more, I hate cliffhangers lol. And I want more. Damn writer's block, I'm having the same problem as well. And it sucks. Write more!
Always and Forever,
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wow this is good i though somthing bad was gonna happen write more dam it write more dam it, wiping the sweat from her head.
lol well done
ceri
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