I Didn't Know Chapter 1

Shelley is your typical 16 year old. She likes to hang out with her friends, talk on the phone, go out and shop, etc. But here recently she has just seperated herself from everyone. Shelley had became really quiet and nobody knew why. 1

One day at school, Devin was being picking on Shelley because of her being a "freak." Shelley kept quiet until Devin said, "Yea, go to your little corner, no one cares." Shelley snapped and screamed, "LEAVE ME ALONE I WASNT EVEN BOTHERING YOU!" Everyone just turned their attention over to Shelley and Devin. Devin had no arguement, so he walked away. 2

Jessica was one of Shelley's friends before she just completely gave up on everything. She had still stuck by Shelley through it all though. "Are you okay, Shelley," Jessica asked. "No, no one will ever understand what is going on," Shelley said quietly. Jessica looked at Shelley and said, "Well, why don't you try to make me understand? Talk to me, don't turn me away." Shelley looked at Jessica for a minute and then said, "Okay I will tell you."3

Author notes

i'm trying my luck with a first story...so sorry if it sucks..and plus its just the first chapter

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  • beautifulbrat
    April 14, 2005
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    Sharon I promise once i get more to write i will post more ys

  • beautifulbrat
    April 14, 2005
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    LOL well keithurbanchick just keep an eye out on more of the story. will post more soon...

  • Brokenheartedangel
    April 11, 2005
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    ooh what happened?! Don't leave me hangin?! Keep it up though. Post the rest ys

  • keithurbanchick
    April 10, 2005
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    Ohhh, how cruel, to leave me hanging. lol. Good story, keep writing on it, I'm curious to see what happens next. Nice place to leave off. (although its not nice!!! lol just kidding )

  • beautifulbrat
    April 10, 2005
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    cant do that i dont know myself...as soon as it comes to me i will post more i promise

  • falling curtain
    April 10, 2005
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    ooh mystery! im curious!! oooh tell me

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