"You told me not to talk to you, so I told myself not to cry, but not talking to you for days....makes me want to die." I say to him, tears bursting out of my eyes. I look at him straight in the eyes, both of us in pain.1
"Please, don't do this, Chaos." Tony says to me.2
"Shut up! You don't care about me."3
"I love you, Chaos."4
"Why did you leave me then? Huh? So your "friends" wouldn't make fun of you because your gay? Is that it?" 5
"Chaos, I had too!"6
"They fucking beat me up everyday, Tony." His eyes widen.7
"They...they beat you up? God damnit, why didn't you tell me?"8
"Because, I didn't want you to worry."9
"Chaos....please just....put down the gun. Come here, please, I would die without you. I'll even tell those mother fuckers that I'm gay."10
"You would do that? For me?"11
"Yes, just come back, please." And with that, I set down the gun and ran into his arms. They felt so secure around me, I knew we were meant for eachother.12
The Next Day*13
"What the fuck?" Says one of Tony's "friends".14
"I'm gay!" Tony yells. Everybody's eyes widen. 15
"What did you just say?" 16
"I said I'm gay."17
"Fuck man." 18
I am hiding in a bush watching everything. Hopefully, this goes okay. I look down and space off. 19
I hear a scream. Oh no! What happened? I look through the bush. Tony! He's getting beaten. No! I check around for my cell. Shiest! I don't have it. I stand up and put my hand around the pistol in my pocket. 20
"Let go of him!" I yell. They guys look at me.21
"Aw, look, it's his faget boyfriend." One of them says. I pull out my pistol as they gang up on me.22
"Chaos....run" I hear Tony barely whisper before he dies. 23
"TONY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I scream. I run out of the group and run to Tony. As I cry, the gang walks over by us. I stand up and point the pistol at my head.24
"Fuck you." I say. Everything goes BLACK. ♥ ♥
"Please, don't do this, Chaos." Tony says to me.2
"Shut up! You don't care about me."3
"I love you, Chaos."4
"Why did you leave me then? Huh? So your "friends" wouldn't make fun of you because your gay? Is that it?" 5
"Chaos, I had too!"6
"They fucking beat me up everyday, Tony." His eyes widen.7
"They...they beat you up? God damnit, why didn't you tell me?"8
"Because, I didn't want you to worry."9
"Chaos....please just....put down the gun. Come here, please, I would die without you. I'll even tell those mother fuckers that I'm gay."10
"You would do that? For me?"11
"Yes, just come back, please." And with that, I set down the gun and ran into his arms. They felt so secure around me, I knew we were meant for eachother.12
The Next Day*13
"What the fuck?" Says one of Tony's "friends".14
"I'm gay!" Tony yells. Everybody's eyes widen. 15
"What did you just say?" 16
"I said I'm gay."17
"Fuck man." 18
I am hiding in a bush watching everything. Hopefully, this goes okay. I look down and space off. 19
I hear a scream. Oh no! What happened? I look through the bush. Tony! He's getting beaten. No! I check around for my cell. Shiest! I don't have it. I stand up and put my hand around the pistol in my pocket. 20
"Let go of him!" I yell. They guys look at me.21
"Aw, look, it's his faget boyfriend." One of them says. I pull out my pistol as they gang up on me.22
"Chaos....run" I hear Tony barely whisper before he dies. 23
"TONY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I scream. I run out of the group and run to Tony. As I cry, the gang walks over by us. I stand up and point the pistol at my head.24
"Fuck you." I say. Everything goes BLACK. ♥ ♥
Author notes
xXForbidden--LoveXx
Kaycie
Falling
You told me not to talk to you, so I told myself not to cry, but not talking to you for days....makes me want to die.
A contest entry
- Anything that you can think of (no sex or content like that) by Tomotsu.
130 points, ended January 1, 29 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is pretty good. It does not fall under the whole "seX" category, but "gays" and "lesbians" are acceptable.
A sad, yet very quick and short story.
I suggest that you add a bit more description of both the surroundings and characters. That way people may understand this passage easier.
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omfg... I so almost cried... thats a lie... I so did... I'm such a pussy, I cry so easily!


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TONYYYYYY!!!!
CHAOSSSS!!!
NOOOOO!!!
*cries*
That was wonderful...but so saddd!!!!
Good Luck In The C-Contest...

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Your Quote Is....
'You Told Me Not to Talk to you, So i told myself Not to Cry, But not talking to you For Days Makes me want to Die'
Now use it wisely Young Sachawan(sp?)
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Lol, kay!
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