Me you fear

I need to be creatively free
take it in your heart to grieve1

Cause I can't stand it when you cry
a little piece of me dies inside2

I just need you to be happy
don't you think together we could be3

Why are you denying my words
you are my love, and fuck this hurts4

We have been there since we were born
now you sit alone to pissed to mourn 5

Paint a canvas with my love
I will bandage up your burns and blood6

Just let me in, you know that I'm here
or is it me you fear my dear?7

Author notes

For my life long friend.

You knwo who you are love.

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  • MsAlee gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Very sweet. I can tell this is a long time love. All I can say is be there for this person and let them know you care over and over and over (sometimes it takes lots of repeating for it to really sink in)


  • Reaver Greeters member
    October 27, 2008

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    Very conflicted actually. Though sweet, the ending is what made the conflict. Supportive and kind...

    Great write Blake,
    ~R


  • TNTrouble
    October 26, 2008

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    Very nice and I know the feeling...although I know your meaning tis different I still understand the closeness...and the pain when someone you are close to is hurting.