“Oh the fridge” Sandy begged.1
“No, no” Frank gazed at the fridge.2
“The freezer” Nick shouted excited.3
“Yes” Frank agreed. They hopped over to the freezer and gazed at the large white machine. “What does this so?” Frank knocked on the door.4
“Let’s go inside” Nick tried pushing the large door open.5
“You won’t open it” A strange deep voice muttered.6
“Oh yeah and who might you be” Frank looked up above and found a lonely bear magnet stuck to the freezer.7
“I’m Ben the bear” The magnet replied.8
“Oh and I suppose you be the one who knows how to open this?” Sandy walked over slowly.9
“You’re right” Ben smiled10
“And how might we do that” Nick asked out of breath from pushing on the door.11
“Well first you might try pulling the door” Ben smiled12
“Oh yea” Nick walked to the door grabbed onto it and pulled. The door popped open and there was a frozen wonderland for the three of them to adventure into.13
“Oh look at this” Frank hopped onto the first floor of the freezer.14
“Told you” Ben’s voice was contained by the door.15
“Told you” Nick copied Ben annoyed.16
“Look at these” Sand picked up a small green shriveled pea. 17
“It’s a cold pea” Frank rolled his eyes.18
“Oh yes I know” Sandy placed it back down. A snowball came from behind her and smacked her in the back of the head. “What was that?” She turned around to see Frank laughing.19
“Snowball fight” Frank shouted as he took cover behind a frozen juice box.20
“Yes” Nick joined in hiding behind a bag of peas.21
“No stop” Sandy tripped and landed face down in a pile of frost. She jumped over and took her battle station behind a frozen meat. Frank and Nick were teaming up on her throwing snowballs over the meat and hitting her in the head. “That’s it” She shouted. “No more Mrs. Nice spoon” She made a large snowball placed in on her head and flung it high over Nick and Frank.22
“Watch out” Nick shouted running.23
“What?” Frank asked as he looked into the air. The snowball came smack down on top of him. He was stuck in the ball of snow. He muttered words that no one could understand.24
“Ha” Nick laughed heaving another at Sandy.25
“Ok that is no time to finish you off” Sandy charged at Nick full speed.26
“This could hurt” Nick braced him self. Sandy hit him like a train sending the both of them flying onto the bag of peas. “Ouch” Nick moaned as he stood up.27
“Hey that is what you get” Sandy threw back her hair and walked away.28
“You guys lets go next door. It sounds livelier” Nick pressed his head against the side of the freezer. Frank walked around crashing into food and frozen juice as he tried to get the giant snowball off his head. “What’s that you say Frank?” Nick asked still listening. Frank muttered a few more words and no one heard him.29
“We could” Sandy answered him.30
“Is just me or is it getting dark in here?” Nick pulled his head away from the wall. Frank threw off the snow ball and ran for the door.31
“It’s shutting” He shouted racing towards the door.32
“Stop it!?” Sandy shouted running past Nick.33
“Hey wait” Nick darted after the both of them. Frank jumped into the air and landed in between the door and the wall prying it open. “Hurry” He shouted. Sandy jumped out and right behind her was Nick.34
“C’mon Frank you can do it” Sandy shouted. Frank was being bent by the pressure of the door and the wall it was closing on. Frank was sent flying into the air and landed in front of his friends. He looked to be a goner but his friends had hope that he was still alive.35
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Comments
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I liked it. It had a kick to it. I have never thought about a freezer war. Now that is a good story. I loved it.
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so where's part 2....lol...great story bud...Peace
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This is very interesting! Um... I'm not crazy about the ending. You know how in all the Children's stories, the good guy always wins? Well, it kinda seems like the guy died here... Well, good job anyway! Keep up the great work!
God bless you,
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Erika
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I remember stories about dead freezers and such...It was a good idea, although it was more scary than just children like...


