Name:
1. Arriana Denise Nelson
Age:
2. 17 yrs. old
General apperance:
3. Deep red hair, almost crimson. Eyes change from blue to green in diffrent light settings. Medium build. 5 7'. Is unknowningly described as beautiful by the opposite sex.
Distinguishing marks: Small scar right under her hairline. Has slender burn marks on each of her shoulders. Mysteriously short fingernails. 1
Background:
4. Has moved from foster home to foster home since she was twelve years old. Has managed to stay in the city of Chicago, though. 2
Schools:
Attends the Chicago Academy for Gifted Students. Is very intelligent and talented. Often plays the piano. Has very few friends. Never opens up to people right away.
Family History:
5. Both of her parents died in a car crash when she was seven. She was then left in the care of her only uncle. After a few months in his care, he began to drink. During his intoxication periods he would beat her for no apparent reason. Once he took a hot comb and placed it to each of her shoulders while raping her brutally. The attacks continued until a concerned teacher called child services after Arriana came to school covered in bruises without an explanation. At the age of tweleve, she became a ward of the state. Her uncle however only got probation.
Siblings: has two twin brothers who are in prison serving a life sentence.
Personality: reserved and shy on most ocassions. Is a push over. Sings rather well. Is very sarcastic when she does speak.3
Ambitions:
6.She wants to become a child services lawyer to help put people who abuse and exploit children behind bars where they belong.4
Responsiblities:
Has to take care of the ten year old foster child in her home named Sophie who was also abused. Treats her like a sister.
Strengths: adapts well to new environments, never gives up
Weaknesses: hates when people pick on kids because of their diffrences. Pushes people away unconciously.(espiecially guys)
Outlook on life:
Believes in GOD but wonders why he allowed her childhood to be so brutal.
Realizes that there is still hope for people like her.
Author notes
this is a character whom i made up on the spot. You can steal her if you want.
i don't know what to do with her.
A contest entry
- I need characters by Elphinstone.
175 points, ended November 10, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Character Profiles, Yay!! by Thorn-on-the-Rose.
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Comments
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She's quite a well-described character for someone you came up with on the spot, great job, and good luck in both my contest and Elphinstone's =DD
-Dani
P.S. this section, ' After a few months in his care, he began to drink. During his intoxication periods he would beat her for no apparent reason. Once he took a hot comb and placed it to each of her shoulders while raping her brutally. The attacks continued until a concerned teacher called child services after Arriana came to school covered in bruises without an explanation' made me shudder but I loved it, it was very heartbreaking and made me want to read more about Arriana Denise Nelson, amazing job, =DD -
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thanx. i'm glad you liked her. Arriana is one of my best original characters. kinda funny how it took me like five minutes to come up with her. lol.
p.s. i love your pic
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haha, thanks =DD Jack IS awesome =DD
-Dani
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I like, ill have to change her a bit for my story, but she'll fit in really neatly. Thanks for the character, I'll try not to hurt her too much, she deserves something nice

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cool
you can have her. i have no use for her. but i'm glad you liked her so much. hope to see her in your story!
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