The Past Comes Back (Ending)

As she stood there watching Indi go into the dark shadow a feet away she lookes up and noticed a sign.. The sign read 'Route 666'.She stood there for a second while a sharp cold wind sent chills up her back.1

"Indi!!" She yelled. She took a few steps into the cold dirt road in front of her. 2

"Indi.. this is not a joke.. Get your ass back here now!!" She screamed from far away into the darkness.3

Suddenly Indi walked out of the dark corner perfectly fine.. She grasped his collar and attached the leash onto it. She pulled the leash but Indi did not budge.. She pulled the leash one more time but the dog still did not budge.. 4

There is something wierd about this street.. Something she  heard on the radio a few nights ago.. but cant seem to grasp it.. "Indi.. Come on!!" She yelled!!5

At the last tug Indi finally broke free.  The leash had broke in half and Indi ran at the first sound of the leash ripping apart. She suddently ran after him because he was the last thing that was close to her.6

She ran about one mile after Indi untill she heard a loud holler coming from the ally a block away. She peeked her head into the allyway to see her dog.. lying there.. not moving. She suddently went full chrage to the body and noticed a dagger stuck into Indi's side. She placed her head on the dogs body as tears started to form on her cheeks, dropping to the dogs corpse.7

She got up and wiped a tear from her eye.. and thought to herself, 'If the dog has a dagger in its side.. That must mean the killer is somewere around here.. Why am i still here?' She suddently ran to the end of the allyway.. But suddently a black shrouded figure stood in front of her. And pulled out a wooden plank and knocked her uncountious.8

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Indi.. She kept thinking in her dreams...12

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She woke up to the shine of a bright light coming from ahead.. It was very dark out and she knew that she was stranded on the side of a inerstate.. She tried to scream but noticed duck tape on her lips concealing her mouth and sound within.  15

Then it happened. She tilted her head bac and saw many dead corpses around her, blood everwere, body parts on the floor, and the smell was horrible. As the sighting of the blood she turned and turned to see if there was any help in all directions.. But nothing.. Just a dark figure in the faint distance..16

It slowly crept closer and closer to her.  And then pulled out a sharp object. He bent down and whispered some sweet words in my ear.. "Hey, remember me? The guy from your past.. the guy you put in jail for many years, Well im back and taking revenge on every soul that did harm agaist me.. So now its your turn Bitch.." 17

The sharpened blade pierced her skin in the back, ripping through every vien, poisoning every last blood cell. She took one last breath but at that instant she started seeing complete dakness, But still felt other pain, the pain of her body being sliced and torn aprt by this monster.. Then it was over..18

The corpse lied there and remained a souless and breathless corpse for the rest of the days.. 19

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Author notes

This is the ending of a story.. For a contest i entered.. here is the website for the firt half of the story..

allpoetry.com/Story/1033316

I hope this is what you are looking for Angel!! I really enjoyed writing it.

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  • Chris Lamb
    April 10, 2005
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    Loved it. Good job and good luck.

  • addicted2nyquil
    April 8, 2005
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    well i didn't read the first half, but the ending is good


  • justin d-
    April 8, 2005
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    hehe.. i loved writing this.. it was so fun..!!!! Lol..

  • SuicidalLover
    April 8, 2005
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    Wow. people are really getting close to what I want. Great job. Lets see what others have to dish out!

    Good luck!