Pitchin'

I have this great script, I'd like you to look at.
It's an epic adventure, perfect for your style of directing. Set far in the future in "end" times, it's got great characters, political innuendo, para-normal is normal,and grandmother saves the island.

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Trying for the curious approach.....lol...

A contest entry

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  • Toxic Paradox
    October 25, 2008

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    I see what you're trying to do here, but this didn't 'grab' me as it might have done. I mean, I'm interested in your story, but not so much that I'd want to read it necessarily - just because I don't know much about it!

    More plot would have been great, but thank you so much for entering.