everything around me is falling1
Nothing is the same anymore2
Everyone is changing 3
and not for the better4
One lost their innocence5
and is being manipulated by sex6
One is in pain7
physical, social, and mental8
The other is just confused9
their life changing constantly10
I want my old life back11
I wanna be happy12
I don't wanna cry anymore13
Can anyone help us?14
A friend has broken away15
we hardly talk anymore16
people come in my life17
make a change and leave18
Families are falling apart19
couples fighting20
people are blinded21
by what they wanna believe22
our wall of comfort if falling23
we cant get it back24
no matter what we do25
nothing will ever be the same26
Author notes
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Comments
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Nice poem
I think you need to add some periods to cut it up and make it flow but good job.
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This is great paige...so which one am i? great job though..it's sad how true it is...just wish i could tell which one i am.
~later~ -
Very Good/Touching
I can relate to that poem. It's done really nicely, as well. I commend you on a good poem there. It touched me deeply. Thank you, it's what my day needed. -
dis is...amazing!!!!! so true indeed. it is soooo like me and my frends and life. it waz really really good!!!
luv pmatilda
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