The Devil's Tomb

okay, before i start, this is based on a true story!1

my family and i had decided to go to this place called the devil's tomb. my sister and her husband had already gone about 100 times and every time they've gotten the shit scared out of them. i suggest if you want background info on the place you should google it(its in NJ)2

Story:3

we embarked to blairsden(devil's tom at around 7:30 on October 15th 2003. all six of us piled into the 1987 green Oldsmobile van(nicknamed rocket ship cause it feels like your piloting a space ship,lol)and headed to out. the whole way there my brother(twin)and i were figgiting around cause we were scared shit. we got to the church that you must got to first so that you can be judged.(mind you that this not like a sponsored thing, this not a ride,or theme attraction,its real)we parked the van in the driveway so that we would be seen by the watchman(wooden statue of Jesus across the street) and we went to go see its face. its face had horns and fangs growing out of it. that meant that the ghost activity would be very bad. we all got back into the car and headed to the tomb. we got there and it was this square brick building that had no entrance into it anywhere. we stayed in the car, and saw something on the top of it. we saw this white flash and so we shone flashlights ontot eh top. there was this kid,wearing all black, and he was very pale. he was crawling around and you could tell that he was an apparition. i got so scared. we could hear him groaning and making weird noises. we all flipped out. so we started to pull away. now i was sitting in the back and as we were pulling away, i could hear this scratching noise on the back of the car. i looking back and saw these two piercing red eyes staring right at me. they then disappeared. i got scared shitless. i almost shit my pants right there but the worst was yet to come.4

we approached the road to the island that was blocked to cars. my bro in law was telling us the legend when we heard the trees start to rustle and watched them swing back and forth. this was a windless night so we all turned out attention to that side of the car. my sister sticks her head out of the window to see better. all of a sudden, this huge shadow shoots out of the trees going at least 20 mph at the car! and it had this high shrieked screaming. my bro in law took off with the car and we just all got scared shitless. i thought it was over but i turned around to see it chasing the car! we were going eighty miles per hour and the thing was gaining on us. then i saw the piercing red eyes again. but this time i also saw it smile, i then heard a soft whisper in my ear, may god save you, because i won't. that's all i remember because i then fainted.5

you don't have to believe me if you don't want to but this is what really happened. i swear.!!!!6

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  • Co-Co-Cola
    June 19, 2005
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    Oh my god! I feel like my heart just stopped! Oh god! I wanna go there now! One day, I am DEIFINITELY going there with my friends! I'm gonna check it out on google right now!



    Dani Girl!

  • Gay-Militant
    April 9, 2005
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    Dude! i googled the devil's tomb to show my step dad and this story came up! thats so frigin funny. i never felt like this before. i feel so retarded cause i feel like a celebrity.


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  • Gay-Militant
    April 8, 2005
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    im sorry if i do but can you imagine what i went through! i couldn't even get up at night to go to the bathroom. then my bro in law played a joke on me and when i stayed at my sis's house, he painted two red eyes on the wall of the room i was staying in. i almost died!!! i wish you could hear some of his stories about that place. they are worse then what i told! if your really interested, IM me


  • -Jarred-
    April 7, 2005
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    i would have died...ur gonna give me nightmares now!!!!