there was this girl that was in a chair and she fell asleep so she imagine that she was in this machine that made her into all the different characters of all the people from like well all sorts ok so the first characters was peter pan but she went into a a bad big fat horrible peter pan that was a monster size peter pan then she imagine that she was going up in space and that she could fly over the hole world in 20 seconds so it was scarey so yeah thats all hope you like it all errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr see ya!
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Good job Liv! You should remember your full stops and capital letters! I don't think there was any spelling mistakes, maybe the odd few. Are you righting in past or future? Couldn't really tell.
I liked it though. Some good spellings for a young age.
Good luck
Your best sister
Lolly x
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