All you have to do is smile1
And It makes my day a thousand times better2
Holding my hand3
I feel like I can take on world with you4
Through the hard times 5
Your the one that keeps me going6
When by myself I Wouldn't have been able to when you are not here7
There is no air for me to breath8
I rather be dead than be without you 9
For a single minute10
You are my life, my future11
Your my light when everything is dark12
Your my motivation for me to do my best in everything I do13
Your my everything14
And I love you with every ounce of my being15
I'm so lucky to have you16
Never In my wildest dreams17
Could I have foreseen it18
When you kiss my lips19
I'm as high as a mountain20
Your my angel
Author notes
Just something that came to my head
A contest entry
- Show Me the Love! by DaniCM.
225 points, ended November 10, 2008, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Anything! by NinjaMegami.
180 points, ended November 28, 2008, 34 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Anything I can do to improve it?
Comments
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very beautiful!
beautiful and honest....so sweet -
Awwww this is so sweet!!!! ^^ I love it
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this is something i would like to hear but you don't often. not by the people you want it to be said by anyway.
beginning: 5, ending: 5.
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awww this is sooo cut
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Vulnerable and honest
Apart from a few spelling/grammar issues, this is really sweet and heartfelt. Lovely. -
very naiive and almost childlike
so captures the true spirit of the whole love business. A few grammatical problems and clunkiness (line 7) but well done -
Beautiful
Simply beautiful......
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Awwww.. whoever this is written for is very lucky. You can really relate to whoever feels this strongly towards someone. It has tons of emotion! Very good job, thanks for entering.
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Again what can i say a poem is worth 1000,000,000,000,000,000,000,001
in my thinking
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Sweet story. Its me on the picture.
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really good
who was it to? -
Whoa this is really pretty and ravishingly written! I will be jealous of the lucky girl who finds someone like you excellent job and good luck in the contest.
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I still love it and my last comment is the same lol!!! Good luck! Thanks for entering!!
~Dani -
very cute
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Cool!
That is so sweet!
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This is really good. Great work!
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Awwww that's sooo good DLF, Im so proud of you LOL!
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awww it was so amazing awwww it was so sweet aww lol many aww's dont you think lol
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You need a girl.
i love da poem!
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werry weryy good!
awsome poem -
this is one of my favorites!!!!! love it!!!! yay i finally got more little clappy things!!!!!
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Awww, this poem is so sweet. Don't change a thing!
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Awww
This was sweet and well written, David
Loved it
Three clappie hands for you
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