Blinded By Bloodied Tears (Itachi Love Story) ~What do you want with me?~ Chapter 3

Recap: "Oroka-San... am I.... am....I.... pretty?" you asked unsure of your unusualy mood at the moment. "........ why do you ask stupid questions Rin? You know that answer for I have told you many times before. You are not pretty, you are ugly... no man would ever want you for the things that the hunters say about you are true. You ARE a monster. Dont ask that question again... no one will ever love you! You only live to take care of me!" you listened to Orokas harsh words. These words had to be true, everything else she told you was true. "I am sorry...Oroka-San." you apologized as you kept walking. Little did you know that the two hunters were not the only people that you would encounter that day.....1

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You listened to the trees rustle nearby, you used to imagine the green lush forest in your mind.... but not anymore. You could feel the soft grass beneath your feet. You used to lightly touch the grass and want to be one with it, just to relax and not be noticed, you didnt have that want anymore. The end of your cloak swayed by your ankles as you took your usually slow steps through the forest. Oraka said "left" or "rigt" everytime you had to step out of the way of a tree that you were about to run into. Oroka was like a lifeline to you, she told you everything you neede to do in order to survive, in order to excist. You trusted your life with her and she trusted you to protect her. If you didnt have Oroka then you wouldnt be living at the moment. You relied on her and only her, you didnt even rely on your own hearing to battle for Oroka told you everything, every detail, every hit, she was the thing that kept you alive. No one knew about her, none of them would even think that a doll would be the one to help you battle.3

A picture suddenly slid into your mind... a picture of your old friend... the one that you had killed. You had never truely forgotten her, even though you tried to. It was confusing, sometimes you missed her and sometimes you thought 'heh heh.... wonder where that bitch is now, bet she doesnt miss her doll. Serves her right what she got, she should have been the one that was suffocated beneath that sand, not me.' the thoughts would make any regular person gasp and think of you as a monster or some kind of person who has mental issues.4

"Rin!?" Orokas low voice sqeauked, breaking you from your thoughts. 'Crap, shes gonna scold me for thinking of my past again.' "Yes Oroka-San I am sor...." "No Rin!" Oroka interrupted, "There seems to be two other people coming this way... both men... what....?...it seems that their chakras are almost triple the chakras of those two hunters." you frowned slightly, you were no longer in the mood, no more blood lust. "They are coming fast Rin." you stopped your foot steps, not knowing what to do, you werent panicking you were just a little confused. "Rin they are....." Orokas angry voice stopped when you heard ywo thuds on the ground, you guessed probably about two hundred feet away from where you stood.5

"These men dont look like hunters...I don know what they are." You calmly listened to Orokas discription of the twp strangers, "I cant see either of their faces for they are covered by straw hats, and the are wearing long black cloaks with red clouds... thats strange." (You and Oroka dont know what the Akatsuki is.... yet.)6

Oroka stopped her small description when heavy footsteps were heard coming towards you. They sounded close...'What is this guy doing....? My other oppponents usaully blab on about how they are so suppierior compared to me.'7

When the footsteps were to close for you to bear any longer you spoke up. "What do you want?" you called out towards the footsteps. There was no answer, only the sound of the footsteps.8

You hadnt realized that they were so close to you when you felt someone grab your shoulder. You quickly pulled away, you hated it when people came into contact with you. "What the fuck!?" you yelled. The footsteps stopped and you could tell they were only a few feet from you. A raspy breathing was heard before the person voice, "..... Your coming with us." the strangers voice was low and almost animal like. No one had ever told you to come with them before...this was strange.9

"What? .... I am not going with you." you were angry, how dare somestranger comeup to you and tell you what to do. Obviously this guy knew nothing about you.10

"If you know whats good for you then i suggest you leave. Consider yourself lucky that Im not in my mood." you started to walk the way you were going, being careful to swerve around the stranger. You had passed up the guy who had demanded that you come with him but forgotten about the other man. As you had walked hastily you were unaware of the the other man. You were aware again when you ran into him, him grabbing both of your shoulders tightly. You took in a suprised gasp before wiggling about trying to get away from the mans grip. This man was obvoiusly strong, you quickly brought your feet up and kicked him in the chest, making him release your shoulders. You dropped to your feet and flipped backwards, now aware of both men. "You are coming with us, you have no choice." the familiar mans voice growled out.11

You lowered your eyebrows, "Im not going with any one." you sighed readying yourself for the battle that you knew would be coming. "Looks like im going to have to do this." you listned to the rustling as the strangers both readied themselves also.12

'I bet I know what they ae thinking... they are probably thinking about how easy this will be... killing a blind girl. Heh, I bet they are thinking that they will arrive home soon to their familys, where they will eat a warm meal and enjoy the comfort of the roof over their heads. These assholes... they should just go stab themselves now, it would save time." You frowned at the silence that would very soon be broken.13

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  • Smile people
    November 7, 2008

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    It was good. You had some spelling wrongs but I got them after a bit. Other then that though it was good. You should keep it up. ^^