♠ The premise of Mr.Defecto ♠

♠ The premise of Mr.Defecto ♠1

It's about these two friends. (Names undecided) 2

A gay guy who wants to know what it feels like to have sex with a girl.
And a bisexual girl who wants to know what its like to have sex with a guy.3

They just graduated yr 12 and are at a massive party: (Kinda like spring or summer break -Americans have). What Australians call schoolies.4

So they have sex and the girl panics after they have had sex. Wanting to get away for a while. Needing some head space.5

She ends up crashing into a guy she fancies and he takes her to a park.
A few weeks later. She finds out she's pregnant.6

To the gay guy of course, but the the gay guy who's been searching for gay love all his life ends up with a bf and she doesn't want to spoil his life. Her best friends happiness.7

So she lies about it being his. 8

The story revolves around that and the issues relating: like abortion, denial, realization, family support and abandonment, the months surrounding, the truth, the actual birth, the losses and gains. And how these two very young people compromise there dreams in life for the life of another.

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My November Nano Idea.

Blair

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  • Cupcake14
    November 9, 2008
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    Wow. This is pretty imaginative, or whatever. Can't describe it. However, I don't see the gay guy's compromise over here. I also find the girl pretty regressive, especially considering the way she lied. If that's the way she is, fine, but otherwise, I don't like it. It sort of annoys me, the whole idea, simply for the fact that she lied. I'm sorry, but well, I'm just being honest.


  • Viola.King
    October 27, 2008
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    Oh my goodness, that sounds so touching and fantastic! Good luck!


  • Heartsick silver member
    October 25, 2008

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    A great idea for a really touchy issue on teen pregnancy and the insecuritieas that come with being a homosexual. This sounds like a lot of fun! Congratz to you, Defecto, I'm excited to read your work

    Ink


  • Immortal Obscurity silver member
    October 24, 2008

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    I'm soooo excited for you sweetie This is a fabulous idea! I hope to read your baby at the end of NaNoVember

    s for you


    • Prodigious.Mirth
      October 24, 2008
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      ME TOO !!!!
      Imma like on speed XD
      I get to start some planning tonight.
      I am considering the names again XD
      I'm so indecisive


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    gOOD THEME

    It has a lot of potential for emotional connections and social comment. What does she endure from others who call her names as her pregnancy develops. How does she deal with the denial of his rights. what does he do when he discovers he is a father. Will he sue for custody in a gay relationship.
    Sounds good.


  • LadyLionnir
    October 22, 2008

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    Wow. It sounds amazing Blair-a bisexual girl pregnant by a gay man. Who would have ever thought that up...you, of course. I can't wait to read it. Keep up the good work and the flow of ideas.


  • DarkOneShadow
    October 22, 2008
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    Interesting

    Plenty of drama and issues abroad, but why the name Mr. Defecto?

    DarkOne

    • Prodigious.Mirth
      October 22, 2008
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      Cause the dudes defected to be a father.
      Or she sees it as a defection.
      If that makes much sense at all sensai


  • Reaver Greeters member
    October 22, 2008

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    doesn't it take longer than a few weeks before you know you are pregnant? Sounds like there is going to be alot going on and i look forward to seeing how you set the timeline in the book. 9 months all rolled into one

    Interesting Idea blair Hope you find the names of your characters

    • Prodigious.Mirth
      October 22, 2008
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      Ah..me no no
      Research Abroad.
      Hay that's a spiffy Idea.
      Nine months rolled into one (sum 30 days)

      Thanks for the comment erobub XD


  • Fizbop
    October 22, 2008
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    I really like this i think this can really give a perspective to something that is common.

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