Hauntedland part 1

I turned on the television, to watch some cartoons, before that, I saw a commercial saying: Go to Hauntedland, where horror becomes real. Hmm, sounds I like scary stuff so I told my dad and asked if I could go there tomorrow. Since it was Sunday tomorrow, I could go if my family says yes. My dad agreed to go so on Sunday, we went.11

My dad found out which place Hauntedland was and it was not far away. So of we went to Hauntedland. The MTR stopped and we climbed out. It wasn't really special yet. We paid the money and first, we came to a humongous house.22

It's walls were painted all gray and it was like a house but a lot bigger. My brother said that it looked cool, I thought so too so Me and my family came inside the haunted house. The ladies which let us in were dressed like vampires, just to scare us of. But I wasn't scared, no way!33

I waited for the others to line up. It wasn't a very long que, but only kids were in the que. I heard spooky music. My brother went in to que, followed by my mum and dad.44

My mum and dad went to line up with me and my brother but of the ladies dressed up like a vampire stopped them. She pointed at a sign saying 'kids only'.55

'Have some fun then, we'll wait for you outside' my mum and dad said. Now it was time for us and a few other kids to go inside. It was quite dark in there but we could see some red words dripping with paint. The writing said:66

You may choose 77

A room88

But whether which door you choose99

You'd better choose the skeleton room1010

This one1111

You'll have the most fun1212

Later on you'll have some more1313

But now you only have four1414

I leaded all the children over. There was actually four doors. I automatically chose the skeleton room because they said so. I opened the door, I went inside, the other children followed me since I think they were a few years younger than me. 1515

We looked at the remains of the bones, nothing scary yet. I looked at the blood splatered on the ground and spooky noises and I felt a hand grab my ankle. child ran ahead of me, and then I heard a scream. The other children and my little brother were probably surprised.1616

We ran to see what has happened. A skeleton had cut of the little girl's arm! The skeleton saw us and chased us, as we ran, more skeletons came. I quickly gave the little girl a tissue to but on her wound. The little girl stopped crying. Then of we ran again.1717

Suddenly, my brother tripped over a bone, the skeletons killed him and he turned into a skeleton. We kept on running. Out of breath I stopped. There we were face to face with a gigantic skeleton of a dragon. It was about 40 meters tall and 50 meters long!1818

It growled and roared. It even puffed fire. We dodged it and each time it hit the ground, it sizzled and then the fire went out. The skeleton caught us all! It swallowed us up without biting. Luckily it didn't bite because if it did, it's sharp teeth would kill us.1919

Down and down we went, and then I found two doors inside. I wondered which one to choose. The words said said:2020

The exit is near2121

is it clear?2222

You probably would want to cheer2323

In the sea monster's den2424

You'll meet Ben2525

You'll find a door,2626

So you go back to to Hauntedland's floor2727

But danger lies ahead2828

So you'd better look ahead2929

So I choose the sea monster's den and the children followed me. When we went in, we found a big submarine, just big enough to fit all of us.3030

We climbed in, I steered it although I didn't know, I just tried. It only had one hour's air supply though. I steered the ship and of we went into the murky waters to find the sea monster... 3131

My brother pointed out another submarine, a waving figure was inside. It must be Ben, I thought. I don't know why but I was stupid that I followed his ship into a dark cave underwater.32

It was a long jorney but then when came face to face with a sea serpent! It swished it's tail an made waves which nearly made our submarine flip upside down! I heard screams and shouts behind me. The sea serpent's had green scales and was very very big.33

Then Ben's submarine went away, I don't know where because he somehow didn't let me see him. Everything went black and then there we were, back to Hauntedland.34

'Not many people survived', said a lady dressed in a vampire costume. I didn't know what that meant. 'Mum', me and my brother said, 'we must get out of here'. But mum and dad didn't listen and they just said : 'come on, let's find a game that we can all play'. 35