A Rainy Night

Boredom grips my sanity.
Staring into oblivion I wait.
Waiting, fading... 1

I glace at my wrists.
The scars glare up at me.
Evil, taunting... 2

Darkness dripping around me.
Shadows torturing my soul.
Following, watching... 3

Blood pouring from my heart.
Tears stream from my eyes.
Flowing, nonstop... 4

Ghosts following my steps.
Haunting my dreams.
Laughing, smirking... 5

The rain pours into the night.
Drops smashing against my window pane.
Slowly, dying...

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  • Stryke Greeters member
    October 23, 2008

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    Again, i took sadness from this. I hope i am reading it right. Very strong wording and emotion. Great work!

  • KitterBean
    October 22, 2008

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    This was really great!
    I glace at my wrists.
    The scars glare up at me.
    Evil, taunting...

    Loved this part!