Nostalgia

It was hard to open up, 1

But even harder to let go. 2

I cannot take the pain, 3

I allow the crimson flow. 4

Haunting nostalgic dreams, 5

Cause melancholy nights. 6

I cannot forget, 7

The good, the bad, those fights. 8

My world is now so cold, 9

They say it's for the best. 10

They don't understand, 11

I've forgotten all the rest. 12

The feel of your skin, 13

The taste of your kiss. 14

I close my eyes and see 15

Just exactly what I miss. 16

I will never forget, 17

The way you made me feel. 18

Deep within my heart, 19

I know that it was real.

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  • Stryke Greeters member
    October 23, 2008

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    THis was sort of like you were remembering a dream and trying to convince yourself that it was real. I loved the wording of it, it brought forth a strong sense of longing and almost liek someone was convincing themself of something. Beautiful write!

  • KitterBean
    October 22, 2008

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    Another really painful but brilliant write from you! Great work!

    Cause melancholy nights. 6

    I cannot forget, 7

    The good, the bad, those fights. 8

    My world is now so cold,

    ^^My fav...
    Keep writing!