Discontent

In my mind thoughts are turbulent,1

Discontent is sew and won't relent.2

Whispered lies cloud my judgement,3

As I think I should repent.4

My mind is a hollow, baren place,5

Thrown into disarray, slapped in the face.6

Who I can trust I do not know,7

Someone has left me with nowhere to go.8

Treating me like my grief is a show,9

Enjoying watching my pain, blow by blow.10

I cower inside the place that was once a sanctuary,11

Now it is nothing but my own pathetic quandary.12

I do not know who to trust anymore,13

Not even those closest to me are sure.14

I am being captured by bait and lure,15

I fear that even my own friends are impure.16

I need help but cannot tell anyone why,17

My lfie has been cast to ruin by someone else's lie...

Author notes

This is something that has been plaguing me for a long time, but I can't tell anyone, not even those who will read this and tell me I can tell them anything...

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  • crosscountry07
    November 22, 2008

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    Awww dad! I hope you are feeling better. Beautiful write though, I can't believe I haven't read it before now.

  • SaccharineMini
    October 21, 2008
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    Awww....how sad. Yes, your poem worries me, by it was wonderfuly written.


  • Disposable
    October 21, 2008
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    AH YOU CAN TELL ME ANYTHING
    Unless I already know.
    I have some crazy theory's racing through my head right now.
    But in the end. I can't force you to tell me everything and I won't.
    Just...your poem worries me.
    But is brilliantly executed.

    blair