Sorry Will Never Be Enough

My tears fall like rain1

On your cold grave2

I wasn't there in your time of need3

And it cost me your4

Warmth, love and friendship5

But most importantly 6

It cost you your life7

As I look at all your pictures8

I ache inside knowing that9

I let you down10

I can say I'm sorry for all eternity11

But it will never stop12

The pain of your loss13

And it will never be enough14

To bring you back to me

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  • KitterBean
    October 22, 2008

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    This was very sad. THat is what i took from it. Made me want to cry actually. So really great writing...brough on heavy emotion!

  • Bernice DeLucchi
    October 22, 2008

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    Quite a haunting poem and the background picture adds to the effect of the words. Well done.
    Regards
    Bernice

  • SaccharineMini
    October 21, 2008
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    Awww...it's so sad. But it is very good, I really really liked it. Well written.

  • Rorshach gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    kiss him whilst alive

    bad coz, well u know