Star Light

Star light, Star bright,
First star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might,
Have this wish I wish tonight.
I wish I did, I wish I could have,
Realized all of the things I should have.
I wish for now, and forever,
That the two of us could stay together.
I wish for the past, I wish for what I should've,
I wish that we were still in love.
I'll wish for you, and I'll wish for me,
And I'll hope our love still can be.
I wish for love, and even though it's lame,
I wish that you would feel the same.
And when I go to bed this night,
I'll wish that you were with me tonight.
So star light, star bright,
First star I see tonight,
Grant me, but one wish, that I might,
Have  you fall back in love with me tonight.

Author notes

A short poem I wrote for me and my ex-boyfriend... I still love him though.

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  • TNTrouble silver member
    October 21, 2008

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    I do like this...how you took the child's saying that we all have said and made it into a poem. Good job.

  • Waterlily857
    October 20, 2008
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    It's okay...

    It could have been better, I was in an odd mood when I wrote it.