She Was Alive: chapter one: A cold night


This story can be difficult to understand. There is a lot of information that is not given and must be assumed from context or simply guessed. questions dealing with the story (dont know what just happened? who is who? how does the main character know the other characters?) need to be emailed to shademoocow@aol.com and will be answered ASAP.1

name: Pronounced: gender: age: connection
vix: vicks: Female: 16 :main character
wolph: wolf :male :17 :Vix's boyfriend(for now)
naro: nar-oe: male: 23: Friend of vix/brother to Nera
nera: nair-uh: Female: 19: Friend of vix/sister to Naro2

1. The cold night3

The sun had set and the moon had risen. The world was cast into a haze of black and white, all the color had bleached away. Sitting in the shadow of a house was Vix, her dark brown hair was hidden by her hood and she had her face pressed to her knees. The cold night air went through her thin jacket and caused her to shiver violently. She pulled her legs closer to her body in an attempt to warm herself. The house wasn't locked. She could go inside if she wanted to. But, she didn't want to. Wolph was inside.
Vix though about what had driven her out of the house. Her and wolph had an argument. The main topic of the argument was something Vix's friend, Naro, had said. Vix did not know what Naro had said that had made Wolph so angry and he wouldn't tell her. He had told her to give him space. She had to let him walk away rather than risk another confrontation. She had not wanted to go inside, so she had sat next to the house and waited the hour till night fell. It had nearly been two hours now. The dark comforted her, but the moon kept it from being pitch black.
Vix heard the crunching of feet on gravel. She looked up to see a slender feminine figure lit by the moons pale light. Her hair was long, wavy, and black, and her eyes were bright green. It was Nera, Naro's sister.
"What do you want?" Vix asked.
"Naro says that he was helping you," Nera replied as she twisted some of her hair in her hand.
Vix twitched with anger. "You and Naro might be ruining my life!" Her voice was low and dangerous.
Nera did not seem scared, "You will live, and grow stonger. I'll see to it."
"No."
"Excuse me?"
I said, NO!" Vix glared at Nera with her angry blue-grey eyes. "I want both of you out of my life! I never want to see you or Hear you ever again!"
Nera didn't look shocked, she never showed emotion. She turned away, "Fine by me." She walked off into the night, disappearing into the dark.
Vix sighed. One problem gone. The cold seemed to have disappeared, she had become numb. She was still shivering. Vix forced herself to stand and walk to the front door of the house. Listening, she could hear voices inside. Wolph was in there, so he seemed to be past the majority of his anger. She slowly opened the door and inched her way in, Keeping silent. She walked over to the couch and settled onto it. It was warm compared to the night outside and she let it take some of the numbness of her body. She almost drifted off to sleep.
Out of her half open eyes, Vix saw movement. She opened her eyes and her heart skipped a beat. Wolph was standing next to the couch, looking at her. She sat up. She wondered if he was still angry at her. She didn't know what he was going to do. A few seconds passed by and he slowly lifted his arms up towards her, a gesture that meant he wanted a hug. She smiled with relief and stood up. She wrapped her arms around him and squuezed as if she would never let go. The last of the remaining numbness from the cold of the night drainsed from her body.4

She was alive.

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yeah. i dont know what to put here

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