Light and Dark's Sister: Chapter 1-Black Clouds Make Disturbing Visions

There are two worlds bound to one another, the Light World, and the Twilight. Eventhough these worlds are shadows to eachother, they rarely mix. Only the Royals of the Twilight can make a portal to enter the other world. Eventhough Royals in th Light World have magic too, they can't create a path to connect the worlds. Normally, this is never done unless under extreme circumstances. One Royal broke this rule. A curious young woman named Shiquinta defied the command to never go to the Light World. She created a portal and went into it. The sudden light hurt her eyes because she was use to the darkness of the Twilight. She explored the alien land out of pure wonder. She stumbled into a young man named Greig. The man was shocked as well as captivated, he never saw a person with light blue and black skin before. Her foriegn beauty wrapped him in awe, as did his tan skin and wavey hair amaze her. They soon fell in love and married, children soon followed. Twin girls were born, but they were opposite. While one child was tan, the other was black and light blue. One had brown eyes, the other orange and red. In some ways, the children were alike. The both had an odd shade of hair. It was a mixture of brown, blond and red. Since these babies are those of Royals, they acquired magic. They each have a unique power, as well as a power that they shared. The tan child got the power of foresight, the other got mind control powers. They shared the ability of changing an item's color and its apperance, but they couldn't change it into another item. The baby that looked like her dad was named Meda, while the other baby that looked like her mother was named Midna. Knowing that their children would be odd in the opposite world, the parents split them up. Midna lived with Shiquinta in the Twilight as princess growing up believing that her father died while she was young, as did everyone else in the Twilight. As for Meda, Greig thought that she should not have to live with the hassal of royalty, so he left her to fend for herself when should could. That was at such a young age for Meda, that she could not remember a thing about her father. So now, thirteen and a half years later, Midna and Meda go on not knowing anything about their twin's existance.1

Midna was lying down in Palace of Twilight's patio watching the black clouds roam across the orange sky. Her hair, which looked orange in the Twilight's darkness, was pulled up into an illaborate ponytail. The clothes she wore were traditional, but stylish, to her anyway. The black cape with Twilght markings on it lay sprawled out on the ground as did the skirt that fell in between her legs.She wasn't wearing a headress today because it tended to get in the way, she only wore it on special occsaions. "Why do you waste your time lying there?"2

Midna picked herself and looked to see her cousin Tellani standing near her. "Why wouldn't I? The clouds are so beautiful. Just because I find beauty in nature and you don't doesn't mean that you have to complain about it."3

"Midna, you are a Royal, just as I am, so you have to see to it that you act like one. Who spends their day watching clouds? It's pathetically stupid if you ask me."4

"Well, nobody asked you. So how about you shut up and go away! You are the only girl in this family that always has a problem so maybe you should go make an arangement to go to rehab and stay there!"5

Tellina said nothing, all she did was walk away and mumbled something. Midna smiled revealing her two fangs. Tellina took away the serenity that was once present, so there was no point in staying. Midna got up and headed for her room.6

In the Light World, Meda woke up. She looked around still drowsy from sleep. She wanted to go back to sleep, but thought it best to go school before she got tardy again. She had no home, she just roamed around. She tended to stay in a clearing she found in a forest that no one bothered to go in. She sat up and glanced at her few possesions. A guitar, a purse with her money, a knife for protection, her backpack and a journal. She felt the necklace on her neck, it was the only thing that she had of her parents left. It said something on the back, but it was faded and she couldn't read it. Meda grabbed her backpack and headed off for school, she wanted to get there early so she could have breakfest. She rarely could force herself out of "bed" in time for breakfest. As she started to walk to school, she felt a pain inside of her. "What the?" blurted ou Meda. All of a sudden, she saw a person that looked familiar to her appeared. She wondered why a person with light blue and black skin would look familiar because no such person existed, but figured that she may have saw her in a dream. The person was beautiful. She had a weird cape that was gorgeious as well as a skirt. To top it off, the person's hair was a mysterious orange that could amaze anyone. Meda called out, but the person did not respond. That person looks like a girl, Meda thought. Is this really happening in front of me, or am I daydreaming? Another person of the same skin color appeared behind the girl and struck her down with what looked to be like magic to Meda. The girl fell not knowing what hit her. Then a portal appeared and the girl was sucked into as she lay unconcious. At that exact moment, Meda passed out.7

Midna awoke and squinted her eyes. Why's there so much light Midna thought. She opend her eyes and gasped. She was no longer in the Twilight.

Author notes

These chapters I'm writing this story using some things from the video game Legend of Zelda Twilight Princess. Only me and my friend, (username id Meda) changed it around a bit. Its about me and mi friendonly cooler than reality. If ur wondering how to pronounce Meda, it sound like meeda.

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  • Evil-Beach
    May 18
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    that really kool


  • Bernice DeLucchi gold member
    October 22, 2008
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    I'd like to read this, but unfortunately the page colour and the font are just too bright!!!


  • cute.pan8
    October 20, 2008
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    This is a very good story. how about you make a story about us? Prweaz


  • Dreama
    October 20, 2008

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    Okay, this sounds like a good story so far but i'm just going to dive right in and say whatever i think needs changing as i go through
    the other got ming control powers- maybe change the word 'got' to inherited/ received. just sounds a bit better.
    looked like- resembled
    changing an items color and appearance- transform the appearance of an object (wouldn't the color be included in appearance?)
    BTW this story sounds a little bit like the disney movie Twitches- twin magical girls separated at birth?

    hmm the story seems quite interesting, and on the whole it is well written. keep writing xx


    • happy.vampire
      October 20, 2008
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      tanks, ill consider those changes. i never saw twitches so i dont no if im wroting that story or not, oops!

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