Star, Shooting

I fly.1

People wish on me, and sometimes their wishes come true, but it's really just the power of their mind that makes it happen. 2

They love to see me. I give them happiness and delight.3

They will wait for hours to see me, and I'm only there for a brief moment.4

I flash through, leaving no visible trace. 5

I may leave a trace in their minds, but only they know for sure. 6

I am seen as a beacon, something special and unique. The reality is that there are thousands of others just like me, all equally captivating and brilliant. 7

If only they could realize this. They could just look around and see all the wonderful things around them. They could see a shooting star every moment of their lives.8

They could fly.

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  • SunshineDancer423
    October 19, 2008
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    WOW

    That was REALLY good,I am so glad you joined!
    I like the fact that it is from a stars point of view not the person watching the star.

  • SunshineDancer423
    October 19, 2008

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    WOW

    That was REALLY good, what did you mean when you said you were biased in your comment?Well I am REALLY glad you joined!


  • B Chandler Greeters member
    October 19, 2008
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    Very captivating