Paint Brush

I keep my paint brush with me1

wherever i may go,2

in case i need to cover up3

so the real me dosen't show.4

i'm so afraid to show you me,5

afraid of what you'll do-that6

you might laugh or say mean things.7

i'm afraid i might lose you.8

i'd like to remove all my paint coats9

to show you the real,true me,10

but i want you to try and understand,11

i need you to accept what you see.12

so if you'll be patient and close your13

eyes,i'll strip off all my coats real show.14

please understand how much it hurts15

to let the real me show.16

now my coats are all stripped off.17

i feel naked,bare and cold,18

and if you still love me with all that19

you see,20

you are my friend,pure as gold.21

i need to save my paint brush,though,22

and hold it in my hand,23

i want to keep it handy24

in case somebody dosen't understand.25

so please protect me,my dear friend26

and thanks for loving me true,27

but please let me keep my paint brush28

with me until i love me,too.

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  • Shanice Cullen
    December 20, 2008
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    Wow your like really good at writing!

  • Hello146xo
    November 27, 2008
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    That was really good. I loved how youo worded things.
    Wonderful job!

  • XxRWs WifeyxX
    November 17, 2008

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    this is really good but then again it seems very sad that ur not confident in urself. i see u everyday with a big smile on ur face. so u could fool us all with ur secret life lol jk but still ive seen ur true self. and it is beautiful love ur sis lol

  • emmabutterfly
    November 6, 2008

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    This is very cute. I will have to read it to emma when she wakes up in the morning. It is very cute. I like art.

  • Once.Upon.A.Time
    November 2, 2008

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    I love it!! It's so wonderfully epicly epic! Great job!!

    (Conscience: Look you dumbnut! It's a squirrel. Me: *Turns around and jumps up and down.* Oh my gosh, it's a flying squirrel!! Conscience: )


  • Ary
    October 20, 2008
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    wooow that was so nice! really cute and honest and open, and very true for a lot of people!

  • Go Go MyStaley-Lily
    October 19, 2008
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    Awww! It's so deep! Very poetic-- I love it!

  • KaleighKatastrophe
    October 18, 2008
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    Oh my godd

    I love it, it is the most beautiful thing I've ever read!

  • DaniCM
    October 18, 2008

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    this is good. everyone has a paintbrush in one way or another. it is hard. and i love how you wrote this!

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