Way To Go

In a ring of friends,
that's how I want to go.
Smiling at the sidewalk,
never saw it coming.1

With a distinct bang,
that's how I want to go.
Screaming sirens, drunken driver,
make a statement, make a move.2

Unexpectedly,
that's how I want to go.
Not wanting to go,
that's how I want to go.

Author notes

Not quite sure this is how I want to go. It does have a point, though.

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  • x3mydarkesthourx3
    December 9, 2008

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    this was an interesting piece, and i really liked it. I loved the ending, it was really clever.

    Good Luck in my Contest!