Pov

Tears are streaming down my face1

Of broken memories that I can’t erase2

And I don’t know; what’s wrong with me?3

You said it would be alright4

But that was before that awful fight5

Oh can’t you see?6

This just can’t be.7

Please set me free.8

All I ever wanted was to dance under the stars9

To make you make you mine forever10

And sing a song on my guitar11

But all you ever said of me 12

is what you think that I should be 13

But that can’t be.14

Just set me free!15

It isn’t right, 16

To lose this fight, 17

And every night18

It’s the old same sight 19

And I don’t know20

Why I can’t let go21

And I can’t see22

All I ever wanted was to dance under the stars23

To make you make you mine forever24

And sing a song on my guitar25

But all you ever say of me 26

is what you think that I should be 27

But that can’t be28

It just ain’t me.29

Treat me differently30

And set me free…31

Just set me free.32

Please set me free33

And I don’t know34

I really don’t wanna go35

But you just don’t show 36

That care anymore37

No, no, no!38

All I ever wanted was to dance under the stars39

To make you mine forever 40

And sing along with my guitar41

But all you ever heard from me42

Was what you wanted me to be43

And I couldn’t breathe 44

And I was blind 45

You took over my mind..46

But that’s alright,47

Cause you lost the fight48

And now I’ll be 49

Treated in a different light50

Cause now I’m free51

Yes I am free. 52

Yes I am free.53

Author notes

...This was one of those random moment spoems that come about... that kinda turned into a song halfway through... anyway, we were in science, when Lacuna (who was sitting across from me) goes, "AH! Tears are streaming down my face!" and then, out of nowhere, I'm just like..." that would make a great poem!" and then i just randomly started writing it... I LOVE YOU LACUNA!!!! ROCK ON!!!

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  • Awesome-Loser
    October 22, 2008
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    Thank You, Thank You hehehe
    well i told you it would come out great i love it yet again

  • Eresipel
    October 17, 2008
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    Well... I really liked it! I think you employ a great feeling in the song, and I like how you repeat the whole freedom thing for emphasis! (Lol, this is sad! But I just had to do it! I mean, PSH. Come on. I'm Eresipel. I'm not supposed to normal! )