Seth found himself in a dark room. The moonlight burst in revealing a pointed knife; it was just waiting for Seth to pick it up. His hand shaking, he hesitantly picked the up the knife. As he was about to strike against his wrist, out of nowhere here popped Bob!1
"SETH! I looooove you Seth. You're my best friend next to Pizza. You know I love pizza!" exclaimed Bob.2
Seth shot a glaring look at him and thought to himself, "I hate you Bob. Everyday I have to live with you, you annoying the very soul out of me." Seth stood up from his crouched position with his hand poised, ready to stab. The lights came on in the room. The walls were black, the floor was black, there was nothing in the room but Bob, Seth, the knife, and...3
"Victoria!" shouted Seth. He dropped the knife. His heart started pounding. All emotion of hatred left him. 4
He chased after the beautiful red-head. She started running the room allowing itself to expand while she progressed. No matter how hard Seth ran, he could not catch up. 5
Then Bob started running and was neck and neck with Victoria. She looked happy with Bob. Rage built up in Seth.6
Bob looked back his face distorting into an evil grin. Most unlike the cheerful Bob. 7
Suddenly Seth found himself in the Barber Shop. He swelled up in fear. He hated haircuts with a burning passion. He tried to get up from his seat, but found himself chained to it. The barber came out of a door laughing like a psycho. He had scissors in his hands. The barber came towards Seth about to cut off his hair.8
Seth had just woken up from his nightmare, his hair still intact. Across from him he saw peaceful Bob. He felt no anger. Seth would one day, get Victoria to be his girlfriend. He vowed it.
Author notes
Um, this is so you know I read the directions, as you requested.
A contest entry
- What do your characters dream about? by EphemeralStyle.
650 points, ended January 2, 14 entries
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Cool. Seth seems to have an almost obsessive love for Victoria. But I take it that Bob likes her too? Well, good transitions between scenes in the dream and good emotion. Hope you enjoyed the contest!
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Completely random - but then again you are detailing a dream. The fact that it is fairly well written made this easy to read - I hope you go well in the contest.
Keep writing and welcome to Storywrite!
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Thank you!
Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it!
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Very interesting and detailed.
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Thanks
Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it!
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This is the single most amazing piece of literature I have ever read that pertains to Seth and Robert, the two most amazing characters ever created. I know, I know; "Robert," you'll ask, "Who the hell is Robert?"
And to that I'll simply shake my head, for Robert is Bob. Surely you could have figured that out on your own, no? But I digress.
This work shall most definitely go down in history as the definitive piece of literature for the 21st century; it is modern, thrilling, and despite its length it keeps the reader's attention throughout.
Truly you are the modern equivalent of an Austen, a Twain; perhaps you are even a modern Shakespeare!
I shall certainly be sitting on the edge of my seat in anticipation of further additions to what will truly be a saga of epic proportions.
((...By the way, in case you couldn't tell, I'm um... Selina. . . . You didn't... really need me to tell you that... right? XD)) -
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No need...
No need to call me a modern Shakespeare. Its only because you think Seth and Bob are awesome! ^_^ -
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I... I do!? How did you figure me out? Wait, don't answer that.
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Not bad.
Interistingly written, very tense.
great work.
Cheers
Hunter~
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Kudos to you. You are the first person to comment my first work. Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it! I did comment on one of your poems to "return the favor". -
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No problem, glad you liked it
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