Love sick story

He says, that he's in love
He talks about like shes from above
He hsays shes like a delicate flower
...But enough about her.1

As he talks, I can't help but imagine
what if..he knew how I felt
I know I don't have the guts to say anything
But I know I don't have anymore time..2

But it's just a love sick story
where the boy doesn't know
but the girl will never tell
and one day, he'll find out in a way
and doesn't feel the same
So I guess I'd better change my mind
Or else I'll go out of my mind.
Cause it's just a love sick story..3

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Ok, thats all for now, I need help writing it still, and if i could get some help writing the next verses, and maybe the bridge
I have songwriter's block, so yeah.
Help!

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  • Electric Hearts
    October 17, 2008
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    omg, thanks sabrina, but i need help with it too.
    this is the song I wrote in math, the other one i just wrote, i wrote it in math, and i want to use your guitar k?
    i really need to make the song, and record[the other song tho]


    • LilMissFearless
      October 18, 2008
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      okay

      is that the one u told me about in french?
      and suree once i get it fixed u can use it


  • LilMissFearless
    October 17, 2008
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    Pretty good!

    Nice!!!!