As I lay there on the floor, my nose broken and bleeding, my arm crushed and twisted, my neck broken in every way possible without dying a slow death I hear the footsteps of the Devil. As she walks I can hear her high-heels click against the paving, her dress move on her body. I see her bend down and kiss me, I die a million times over.
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Comments
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Was very strong in the short space delivered, and i enjoyed reading it. Grammar was faultless and the storyline was great. I liked that the devil was a woman in high-heeled shoes..
Great job!
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some grammer and frsgment problems but am too lazy to piont them out right now. A great short-short story. Although some places were a bit odd to read kinda like they didn't make sense but they did.
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