I had the right to make him love me, even if it was fake on my part.1
I had the power to say he belonged to me, even if I owned another.2
Perhaps my mind did not comprehend that he could leave without a word, and steal my soul away forever.3
A contest entry
- Story in only Three Sentences by Reaver.
550 points, ended October 16, 2008, 28 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
did sound even kinda sorta like a story line
Comments
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This was well done. These three sentences pack a lot of punch and draw the reader in to wonder "why?" and "what's the story here?". You accomplish a lot with a little and that's the pinnacle of every writing endeavor, to do the most with the least. Well done.
al
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Unusual.
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Well done...
...Seems warranted if you ask me…karma hurts...
This was marvelously written, but I didn’t quite get the ‘story’ feel out of it. More Poetic than a story. Thanks for entering and best of luck!
Rian Dyiti
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