she lived for a love that never came. She died with a hate that no one should ever know. All that remained was despair from people who'd never noticed any difference.
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..... Maybe I'll enter again with something more logical.....
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- Story in only Three Sentences by Stryke.
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Very good,
she/She
She lived for a love that never came. She died with a hate that no one should ever know. All that remained was despair from people who'd never noticed any difference.
Strange, but this rather reminded me of an obituary or commemoration. Very good in structure…could have extended a bit…but largely…a very sturdy piece that was awarding to read. Thanks for entering. Best of luck to you.
Rian Dyiti
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