I watch in horror as she gets stabbed and stabbed again, but her face has taken pleasure to this. I can hardly look when the murderer sliced her neck, but all she did was smile and bleed to death. He aimed the knife at me then threw it with a thrust, it peirced through my heart with a jolt.
Author notes
They basicly died by a killer with a knife. Random, right?
A contest entry
- Story in only Three Sentences by Stryke.
550 points, ended October 16, 2008, 29 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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This is pretty good, I liked it. Great three sentencings. Great job.
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random, original, amazing ! :]
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wow that was totally awesome~!
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Lol. yay! <3
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peirced / pierced
I kind of liked the abrupt ending..symbolic of death
However, i didn't get why the first victim was happy about getting stabbed. ??
Great story that came full circle. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you
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Wow..
I never knew you had a mind like this...
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