trust♥

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if you trust me2

i'll trust you3

take my hand4

and we'll leap together5

because some things6

are just irreplaceable7

and baby8

you're one of them9

- - - -10

since you trust me11

you can tell me12

absolutely anything13

right from the colour14

of socks you're wearing15

to the deepest secret16

hidden in your heart17

either way18

it'll always be19

our little secret20

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I know, I know, I KNOW. It's pathetic. And I know I sort of stole lines from my other thing, but whatev. Maybe it'll inspire a story?

riccaa.♥

ps>> i am no longer fighting the impossible; instead i'm going with the flow! haha.

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  • bakermiddle
    October 19, 2008

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    This may be simple and short, but it's truly powerful. I envy your writing skills and you just amaze me with the way that you entail so much truth into your work. Great job.


  • Black Dragon15
    October 16, 2008
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    It's not pathetic! It's sweet!

    Really adorable and the romantic in me says it's just that: romantic in a way. My favourite's the first stanza. Dunno why, I just love it.

    I love all of it. And if it inspires a story, all the better. It'd make for an epic read.


  • Mel-the-Believer
    October 16, 2008

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    I liked this a lot. And although simple in it's own way, it's also powerful. Wonderfully written. I loved it. Either I'm pathetic or this is defenitely not pathetic and I hope to go with the second one. Keep up the writing. God Bless!