Stand in the Rain

Stand in the rain, 1

because it’s all that hides the tears you cry. 2

Stand in the rain 3

because when you do, you can be free.4

Stand in the rain5

and maybe someone will hold you. 6

Stand in the rain 7

and dance through the drops. 8

Stand in the rain 9

because it will make you laugh.10

Stand in the rain11

just because you can. 12

Stand in the rain. 13

Author notes

Idea came when I was thinking and listening to Superchick's "Stand in the Rain"

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  • Windsong1041
    March 22
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    Great!

    That was a awesome piece of writing!!! I that song too. Good job :-D


  • Someday Hero. gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    Sounds like the song...nice though, but if you got the idea from the song 'Stand In The Rain' by superchick, Then I'd put that in the author notes.. ¤§Alexis§¤

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.