Mindless Killing

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Gang fights with guns firing all around, a child stands in shock. One bullet hits her head. The child now lays dead, and no one even cares.2

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gang wars .... when an innocent dies.

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  • cre8iv-writer
    October 16, 2008
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    How sad!! Powerful yet brief!! Great job!!


  • Reaver Greeters member
    October 16, 2008

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    This was very grim to think about, but unfortunately very true in todays world. Great job with this...you are a finalist.